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浙江省重点中学 2013 届高三上学期期中联谊 浙江省湖州三县 2013 届高三上学期期中联考 浙江省宁波市金兰合作组织 2013 届高三上学期期中联考 浙江省温州十校联合体 2013 届高三期中考试
山东省聊城市堂邑中学 2013 届高三 11 月月考 海南省琼海市嘉积中学 2013 届高三上学期高中教学质量监测 辽宁省五校协作体 2013 届高三上学期期中 辽宁省沈阳二中 2013 届高三上学期期中 河南省中原名校 2013 届高三上学期期中联考 河南省洛阳市 2 013 届高三“一练”考试 河南省长葛市第三实验高中 2013 届高三上学期第三次月考 2012 河北省名师俱乐部高三第二次调研考试 河北省保定市八校 2013 届高三 12 月联考 贵州省晴隆民族中学 2013 届高三上学期期中 贵州省遵义四中 2013 届高三第三次月考 甘肃省武威六中 2013 届高三第四次阶段性学科达标 宁夏银川一中 2013 届高三第四次月考 四川省资阳市 2013 届高三第一次诊 成都七中高 2013 级高三上期半期考试 黑龙江哈师大附中 2013 届高三第三次月考
01（浙江省重点中学 2013 届高三上学期期中联谊）
第一节：短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。 文中共有 10 处语言错误，共有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单 词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1 ．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从 11 处起)不计分。 Manager, I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema. First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly. As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make more improvements. Yours faithfully, Li Hua
【考点定位】 ：考查及物动词的用法。 【答案】 ：terribly-terrible 【解析】 ：something 是不定代词，其后的修饰词用形容词。
【考点定位】 ：考查形容词修饰代词。 【答案】 ：will-would 【解析】 ：本句是 if 引导的虚拟条件句，表对将来（或现在）的推测和假设，主句中把 will 改成 would。 【考点定位】 ：考查虚拟语气。 【答案】 ：a-the 【解析】 ：我写的这封信，表特指，用定冠词 the。 【考点定位】 ：考查定冠词的用法。 【答案】 ：去掉 on 【解析】 ：consider（思考）是一个及物动词，直接接宾语。 【考点定位】 ：考查动词的用法。
02（浙江省湖州三县 2013 届高三上学期期中联考）
第一节：短文改错 (共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分) 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧ )，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从 11 处起)不计分。 This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old ma n stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
03（浙江省宁波市金兰合作组织 2013 届高三上学期期中联考）
第一节:短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个的单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ，并在其下面写上该加的词。 ） 删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Years of school life has taught me a lot of thing, of which teamwork is the most important for me. In fact, I didn't realize its importance until I was chosen the monitor of my class in my senior
middle school. At first, I did most of the duties myself when other students cared little about class activities. As result, I was tired out and depressing. Then I turned to his teacher and he advised me to cooperate to others. Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and had everyone do their part in class. It is working in teams instead of on my own who has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficiently.
04（浙江省温州十校联合体 2013 届高三期中考试）
第一节：短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧ ，并在其下面写上该加的词。 ） 删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In the other hand, I can make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow.
05（山东省聊城市堂邑中学 2013 届高三 11 月月考）
（甘肃省张掖中学 2013 届高三第四次月考） 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行 修改。 文中共有 10 处错误， 每句中最多有两处。 错误涉及一个单词的增加、 删除或修改。 [来 源:学科网]
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^） ，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。 I just come back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28. We paid a visit to many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there. 【答案】 ：come-came 【解析】 ：时间状语是 last week（上周） ，用过去时态。 【考点定位】 ：考查动词的时态。 【答案】 ：luckily-lucky
06（海南省琼海市嘉积中学 2013 届高三上学期高中教学质量监测）
短文改错 （共 10 个错误，满分 10 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你的同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有
10 处语言错误， 每句最多有 2 处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 ） 删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲ ）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词。 2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不记分。 Dear Jim, I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6, which was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-metre race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke th e school record. We can’t speak too high of him. To my great joy, my class was rewarded first prize. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done. Looking forward to receiving your letter. Yours, Li Ping
本题和辽宁省五校协作体 2013 届高三上学期联合竞赛在选材基本一样，略有改动。 （辽宁省五校协作体 2013 届高三上学期联合竞赛）假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换修 改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增 加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\） ，并在该句下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Dear Jim,
Thank you for your last letter telling me your recently news. I'd like to tell you something about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.20, which was a fine day. There were over 1,600 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finishes the race in 11.2 seconds and broke down the school record. They were all very excited. The sport s meeting was great success. That was why we were all making every effort to our class honor. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of what we had done. Looking forward to receiving your letter. Yours, Li Ping
07（辽宁省五校协作体 2013 届高三上学期期中）
10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 ） 删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 As a teenage r, I remember Dad get home lately every night. He already had a great work and loved by his students. He took years to finish that he wanted. And now, decades later, I see myself for him. I go to work throughout the week and then came the weekend. I go to class for six hours on Sunday so I can finish my degree that I started twenty years ago. It took me the long time to figure out that what I wanted. I want to do for student what my father did for students. In my opinion, my father is my real hero.
【解析】 ：我的学生们，和下面的“和父亲的学生们并列。” 【考点定位】 ：考查名词复数。
08（辽宁省沈阳二中 2013 届高三上学期期中）
第二节：短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处 语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As for me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students maths, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.
09（河南省中原名校 2013 届高三上学期期中联考）
（河南省中原名校 2013 届高三上学期期中联考）假如英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改 作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单 词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号^，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。 修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； I went to a shop to buy a jacket one Sunday. It is famous one where there are a variety of clothes. I looked all around and finally find an attractive jacket. When I was asked the price, the assistant said, "Seventy dollars." He added that if I paid by cash, he would give me a discount – ten percent off the fixing price. I thought it was so expensive and started to leave. As I was left, he grabbed me and said, "Okay. Forty-five dollars." Delighting, I bought the jacket. However, when I got home and tried on my new jacket, I realized that anything was wrong with it. It had a pocket where wouldn't open. I was speechless and looked at it in amazement.
10（河南省洛阳市 2013 届高三“一练”考试）
第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共 有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 I am very much glad to receive a letter from you. You know, in China we call people born between 1990 and 1999 the post – 90s. I am a boy belong to this group. For our generation, life is getting more difficult than for the old generation. The job market is tough. The house is too expensive to afford. Now many girls would like marry a man who own a house and a car. I don’t think love built on houses and cars was true love. And this is the social reality that they have to face. Because situations are tough today, we post – 90s are making great effort to live a good life. We think we will make lif e better and better in the future.
11（河南省长葛市第三实验高中 2013 届高三上学期第三次月考）
第一节 短文改错 (共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧ ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 ) 删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者 (从第 11 处起) 不计分。 In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town. It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend, or attend a wedding or birthday party. I sti ll remember clear one day last year when Tom, a disabled student, presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his mother’s kind and care. With her he would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a result the great effort he has made, he was finally admitted to a key university. 【答案】 ：flowers-flower 【解析】 ：许多花店，名词修饰名词，作定语，通常用单数。 【考点定位】 ：考查名词作定语。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有 l0 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在 缺词处加一个漏字符号（√)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(／)划掉． 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 l0 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分． Thanksgiving Day is one of the most important family holiday in America. All the members of a family, no matter where far away they are, will try to get together in that day. The first Thanksgiving in America takes place in October 1621. In 1620,the group of Englishmen sailed to Massachusetts .They were looking for a freely place to live in as they chose. So they experienced a hard winter. Half of them starved death. The next spring,they
began farming. With the help of local Indians,they learned to be plant corn and raise animals. In the fall, the fields produced a good harvest,. Filling with joy and thanks to God,they held A celebration. In 1863,it became a national holiday.
13（河北省保定市八校 2013 届高三 12 月联考）
第一节：短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 ） 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Three years ago, I became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby
campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient but considerate．Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class． decided to make the best use for it. I worked hardly and I got along well my teachers and classmates．Whenever I had difficulties, they were always helpful. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated． My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determines who you are．
14（贵州省晴隆民族中学 2013 届高三上学期期中）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的添加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧ ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 ） 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 One day a child was play with a vase of great value. He careless put his hand into it. Hard as he tried, he could not pull it out. His father tried his best, too, but their efforts were in a vain. They were thinking of breaking the vase whenever the father said, “Now, my son, why have one more try? Open your hand or hold your fingers out straight as you saw I doing, and then pull.” To his surprise, the child says, “I can’t hold my fingers straight like that, because I don’t want to drop my penny.” Thousand of us sometimes are so busy hold on to the world’s worthless penny that we cannot achieve liberati on.
【解析】 be busy doing sth 忙于做某事。 ： 【考点定位】 ：考查短语 be busy doing 。
15（贵州省遵义四中 2013 届高三第三次月考）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west. I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864. After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
16（甘肃省武威六中 2013 届高三第四次阶段性学科达标）
第二节：短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ，并在下面加上该加的词。 ） 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Music always has a special effect for people. You don’t have to know when it comes from and what language it is, but still you can enjoy it. Of all the music I like country music better. I like the comfortable feeling it gives me. It was on the radio where I first hear it. Though I can’t remember the name of th e song, but I remember I was thinking of the blue sky, the green land and the quiet life in the countryside when I was listening to it. From then on, I took great interests in country music and bought a lot of tapes. In my spare time, I like to play the tape and enjoying the music myself. My parents like them, too. They say the music always reminds them the good old days.
17（宁夏银川一中 2013 届高三第四次月考）
第一节：短文改错 (共 10 小题;每小题 1 分,满分 10 分) 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧ ，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 ） 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby which is both interested and fun. And every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which can even last lifetime. Starting your collection of stamps are easy because they are nowhere. Holiday and birthday postcards and letters send by your friends and relatives can provide you for stamps from all over the world. But once you’ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors ’Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.
18（四川省资阳市 2013 届高三第一次诊）
请找出下列短文中的错误，并直接在短文中改正。 （每小题 1 分，共 10 分） 改错格式（要求） 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 ） 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从 11 处起）不计分。 请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉 及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 ） 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Dear Editor, I was a happy girl with a warmly family. My parents loved each other although my family was poor. But everything changed when my father fell in love by a young girl about two year ago. Since then, quarrels happen at home almost on every day, left me and my sister crying in despair. I hate that woman which stole my father. I even hope to live with her before my parents separate and take revenge (报复) on him. But sometimes I think that is not right and I really didn’t want my parents to divorce. What should I do? Could you give me hand? A desperate girl
19（成都七中高 2013 级高三上期半期考试）
下面短文中有 10 处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧ ，并在其下面写上该加的词。 ） 删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
As time passing by, young students from all over the world get together at one of the sixteen conservation camps. The aim is to help protecting the countryside and its wildlife. Many animals and plants are in danger of disappear forever. The dormouse, a kind of mouse, for example, needs woodland plants for food and trees to stay. It’s habitat is being destroyed by man and it needs our help to survive. Through this activity you will learn about the nature and how to protect it. Our trained leaders will company you and tell you everything what you need to know. Because of this, you needn’t to have any experience, just energy and enthusiasm. You will explore the countryside and work to ensure the survival of hundred of animals and plants.
20（黑龙江哈师大附中 2013 届高三第三次月考）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ? ） ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2． 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Dear Jack,
I am Li Hua, one of your student in China．It's a month since you left us．We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did it for us． We are still very busy．We had the English speech contest the another day． I won the first prize, as again reminded me your great help． Do you still remember the trees we plant together on the hill beh ind our school? Yesterday, they went there and watered them． The tree you planted yourself is growing good, and we've decided to name it Jack Wood． Will you come back to see Jack Wood some day in the future? We hope to know much about you and let's keep in close touch．